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if you are referring to the first track that played - i liked the sound of it untill the first synth kicked in, which i found a bit on the cheesy side and a bit predictable - the melody could be more interesting (a bit less hands in the air) - i thought a lot of the percussion and other noises that came in after that were a bit too obvious if you know what i mean - a bit too clean as well. Try using percussion that you don't hear everywhere and try processing it a bit more - also some of the rhythms were a bit obvious too

great kick drum though with a nice amount of reverb - you're definately heading in the right direction just try and think outside the box a bit more